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Blacksmith

Joined: 25 Jan 2005
Posts: 5025
Location: Berkshire

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 5:59 pm Post subject: Title and description help please !

I have recently been asked to make some more display stands, there is obviously a gap in the market, I would like to fill it

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I want to get some business cards and advertising postcards printed ( good old Vista print

)
I wondered what you good people thought of my title and description for cards, adverts in magazines, websites etc etc
A. Display Stands.
B. Bespoke Display
C. Bespoke Display Stands.
D. Handcrafted Display Stands.

1. Individually handmade from metal, wood and acrylic.
2. Hand made stands for artifacts, collectibles and museums.
3. For museums, antiquities and collectibles,
Individually hand crafted from metal wood and acrylic.
4.for collectors, museums and antiquarians.

This is the type of thing I make, ta for any advice/input.
Dave.

tahir

Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 45674
Location: Essex

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:02 pm Post subject:
Bespoke display stands hand crafted from metal, wood and acrylic. Large runs or small.

Sarah D

Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 2584

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:04 pm Post subject:
D and 1 for me, seem more inclusive.

snowball
Downsizer Moderator

Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 6246
Location: swindon

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:06 pm Post subject:
Wot Tahir said. Hits all the right buttons and has a nice ring to it.

Blue Sky

Joined: 30 Jan 2005
Posts: 7658
Location: France

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:08 pm Post subject:
What's with the big red rubber duvet cover? Sorry, C-1 I reckon

Sarah D

Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 2584

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:10 pm Post subject:

dpack

Joined: 02 Jul 2005
Posts: 46240
Location: yes

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:46 pm Post subject:
d 1 best of mate

sean
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Joined: 28 Oct 2004
Posts: 42219
Location: North Devon

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 6:47 pm Post subject:

Simon wrote:

What's with the big red rubber duvet cover?

It's for his big red rubber duvet of course. Derrrr.

What Tahir said, in answer to the question.

AnneandMike

Joined: 21 Jun 2006
Posts: 890
Location: Over the hill and soon to be far away

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 7:14 pm Post subject:
I like D and 3.

Blacksmith

Joined: 25 Jan 2005
Posts: 5025
Location: Berkshire

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 8:49 pm Post subject:
Thanks Even more confused now........... (closes eyes, gets out pin and picks one...... bursts rubber duvet )

alisjs

Joined: 23 Jun 2006
Posts: 1497
Location: Conwy

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 8:57 pm Post subject:
I go for D and 1 as well. For no good reason I can think of, I don't like the word "bespoke" !!!!

dougal

Joined: 15 Jan 2005
Posts: 7184
Location: South Kent

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 07 9:18 pm Post subject:
Like Alisjs, I'd avoid the word bespoke. Display stands, tailor made to your requirements. Handcrafted in metal, wood and acrylic. One off or dozens - ask us!

mochyn

Joined: 21 Dec 2004
Posts: 24585
Location: mid-Wales

Posted: Fri Jun 29, 07 5:33 pm Post subject:
You aren't half clever, aren't you, Blacksmith? Wish I could do stuff like yours.

Blacksmith

Joined: 25 Jan 2005
Posts: 5025
Location: Berkshire

Posted: Fri Jun 29, 07 9:23 pm Post subject:

mochyn wrote:

You aren't half clever, aren't you, Blacksmith? Wish I could do stuff like yours.

1. Buy a welder.
2. Spend a couple of weeks in the shed practicing.
3. As good as me

Cathryn

Joined: 16 Jul 2005
Posts: 19856
Location: Ceredigion

Posted: Fri Jun 29, 07 10:57 pm Post subject:
there goes your market then

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