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chez

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Posts: 35935
Location: The Hive of the Uberbee, Quantock Hills, Somerset

Posted: Sun May 20, 07 8:58 am Post subject:

Justme wrote:

Chez wrote:

Great, really great. It sounds professional, friendly and approachable. And what about tweaking 'limited' to 'limited edition'? Sounds even more arty!

I would say that in todays market "limited edition" is marketing speak for we normaly can sell these in bulk (IE 100,000) but dont think these will sell that many so have only made 10,000. For the smaller market say that each one is unique or individual.

Justme

I was thinking more of things like signed prints etc. - that are truly 'limited edition'. But I can see your point

2steps

Joined: 05 Sep 2005
Posts: 5349
Location: Surrey

Posted: Sun May 20, 07 12:00 pm Post subject:
thanks everyone Maybe I could add a bit on the about page saying what I mean by limited. I'd be unlikely to make even 10 of something let alone 1000's

lettucewoman

Joined: 26 Sep 2006
Posts: 7834
Location: Tiptoe in the Forest!!

Posted: Sun May 20, 07 5:03 pm Post subject:
looks good 2steps - make sure you check the spelling though (required), and you say "will do my best" twice - you might want to think of another way to say it. Just my own preference - with my websites I try not to repeat myself, and I spell check like mad over and over again(dyslexic so know there will be loads!!!) Good luck! Oh and if you make your own findings (i do too) ...say so!

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